在雅想写稿中，一切的写稿手段齐不如对写稿的细节把执。在平时的写稿纯属中，考生不错字据雅想写稿评分圭臬来揣测我方的写稿水平。

一.远离无须的单词和词组

1.一些不必要的单词或词组压根不成为句子带来任何干联的或蹙迫的信息，澈底不错被删掉。比如：When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“齐显得足够。澈底不错去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.替换败兴的抒发，专门写出复杂的长难句，可是让统共这个词句子显得尽头冗长，其实并不会给你的雅想作文加分。

举例：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”便是一个很典型的繁琐的抒发神志的例子，不错替换，简化为底下的抒发神志：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

二.远离类似词汇和抒发

1.雅想写稿评分圭臬中有少量：丰富性。许多考生作念不到在写稿中使用更丰富的词汇和抒发，也就与高分交臂失之。有的时候固然词汇莫得类似，但兴趣却有类似。这时候不错作念一些简化的使命。

举例底下这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large对一个farm来说便是size方面的large，是以in size不错去掉，改为：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。更粗略的抒发神志为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm。2.未必一个词组不错用一个更浮浅的单词来替换

举例：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents＇ farm。

这里的over and over again就不错改为repeatedly，显得更为粗略：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents＇ farm.

雅想写稿备考误区

1.背大学四六级词汇就能顺利通过雅想写稿纯属相配无数目的同学外传惟有花时间把大学四六级的单词全部背熟就能参预雅想写稿纯属。

其实，大学四六级英语纯属和雅想纯属澈底是2种不同的英文测试系统，两者莫得内在关连，应试法子也大相径庭。

是以同学们花大元气心灵在背诵和驰念大学四六级词汇无疑是浪掷时间和芳华的一种看成。

针对这一误区，提议考生多阅读海外学术类确认，积聚词汇和习用句型，或者看剑桥雅想系列真题集4-10，内部的阅读著述包括附录中考官给出的高分范文中的词汇齐是雅想写稿纯属的蹙迫词汇。

此外，未必间的同学不错参预专科和系统的雅想考前培训，在较短的时间内，老诚会教化你们怎样正确科学并高效地准备雅想纯属。

2.裸考雅想，以考代替温习

尽管雅想纯属并不像高考那样一考定毕生，每年有40多场雅想纯属不错参预。可是毫无准备的去参预纯属本人是一种不老成和对我方不郑重，对父母血汗钱的一种亵渎。

因此提议同学们必须历程系统培训或者自学后，有一定的准备和把执了再去参预纯属，以期顺利通过。

3.反复作念剑桥真题系列，就能得回写稿高分

剑桥真题系列是一套相配经典和泰斗的雅想应试贵府，不错这样说，统共准备参预雅想纯属的考生基本东谈主手齐有一套剑桥的课本。

正确的作念法是要仔细阅读剑桥附录中考官所写的范文，探讨其段落布局，词汇句型，培养想路和语感。

雅想作文写稿例题

大作文题目：Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad consequences， so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

话题分类：媒体类

1.题目浮现：

题目卤莽：一些东谈主以为报纸和电视上对于犯警看成的细节描写有负面的影响，因此这样的信息在媒体中应该被规定。在何种进度上愉快这个不雅点？

题型脾性：需明确标明对不雅点的作风；同期，题目中有一部分信息是不雅点的原因，‘对犯警看成的细节描写有负面影响’，对这部分信息不成忽略了复兴，不错跟主体段讲明应该被规定放在沿途复兴。

本文论文鼓吹：起头引出当下对于媒体的争议，以及题目中的不雅点，标明我方态度。中间段先分析为何此类信息需要被规定，接着用衰弱的神志承认一些媒体上此类信息有一定平正，但过于细节的是需要规定的。斥逐总论断点，重申不雅点。

难点：这谈题容易让考生纠结规定的‘进度’问题，提议同学们针对题目给出的要害信息‘detailed description’进行复兴，即咱们的不雅点是‘规定媒体上对于犯警细节的描写’，而不是澈底不合犯警信息进行报谈。

2.写稿想路：

起头段：当下媒体目田度较高，对犯警的报谈也越来越丰富。有东谈主惦记此类细节的报谈会产生不良斥逐，应该被规定。个东谈主不雅点暗示愉快。

主体第一段：之是以应该规定这一类细节描写，有几大原因。受到最大影响的是犯警的受害者，报谈过于细节，会加剧他们的身心创伤，致使扰乱隐痛。而对闲居专家来说也有害，细节描写含有过于血腥暴力的实践，不仅引起不适，也让东谈主担忧对年青东谈主的影响。三是对于一些潜在的犯警份子，这些细节报谈可能会给他们提供信息复旧，刺激和怂恿了犯警看成。

主体第二段：天然，规定的报谈有正向作用，也有东谈主以为在报纸和电视上对犯警进行一定进度的报谈不祥让专家增强安全相识，了解犯警份子的看成格式，改善保护要领，幸免成为受害者。但报谈的实践应当进行充分审查，进行要害着实认即可，细节的报谈是莫得必要的。

斥逐段：总的来说，基于对人人和犯警率的影响，犯警的细节描写是需要受到审查和规定的， 固然报纸和电视有协助专家栽种夺目相识的连累。

参考范文

Increased degree of freedom in media reports has allowed exposure of crime cases to come forth in a detailed manner， which certainly arouses a great deal of concern. In light of this， some people believe there should be restrictions on such information. From my perspective， I agree that censorship should be imposed on the descriptions of crime.

There are several reasons why the focus of newspapers and television on high-profile crimes should be more carefully regulated. The group most affected by the news media＇s coverage of violence and victimization is crime victims. This is because media coverage that is sometimes viewed as insensitive， voyeuristic， and uncaring can largely violate victims’ privacy and inflict their emotional and psychological suffering. Not only that，the general public seldom benefits from this exposure to crime details. In fact， these descriptions can not only cause discomfort but also arouse apprehension about the impacts on young people. Besides，it is likely that potential offenders would be instigated and incited to commit crimes， since they might regard detailed media coverage as a form of guidance.

It is undeniable that the coverage of crime cases can be helpful and，in some cases，even healing. Some would also suggest that the media have the obligation to keep the public well informed about trends in crime. Indeed，the media play a significant role in public safety by keeping citizens apprised of essential information on criminal affairs，such as new patterns of fraud，ways to assist victims and measures to prevent crime. However，the extent to which the media can cover about these cases should be censored carefully by avoiding excessively detailed descriptions，so that they can accurately cover crime stories with the least amount of trauma to the victim and negative repercussions on the public.

In conclusion， although newspapers and television need to raise the public awareness of key information on crime cases， I contend that restrictions should be imposed on excessive descriptions of details开云体育(中国)官方网站， in order to mitigate the detrimental consequences.

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